M. K. Theodoratus, Fantasy Writer, blogs about the books she reads--mostly fantasy and mystery authors whose books catch her eye and keep her interest. Nothing so formal as a book review, just chats about what she liked. Theodoratus also mutters about her own writing progress or ... lack of it.

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Thursday, March 5, 2015

My Worst Writing Fear: Losing the Interest of my Readers -- N. P. Griffiths

 

My Worst Writing Fear:
Losing the Interest of my Readers

by

N. P. Griffiths



     What is my worst writing fear? Is it the thought of no one reading my work or of suddenly losing the will to write another word? No, not really. Is it the fear that someone will beat me to the punch when it comes to publishing a story with a certain theme? Nope. Let’s be honest the fantasy genre has been around for a while now, so everything has been pretty much done before in one form or another.

   I guess my worst fear, when I think about it, is losing the interest of the reader. Keeping the readers interest is central to everything. I know it sounds obvious but everything pivots around fixing their eyes to the page. A reader who has gone from ‘This is great’ to ‘meh’ is not one who is likely to continue with your book or read anything that may follow on after.

   The problem for a writer is that, whatever genre they’re writing in, it is likely to be crowded with books that are trying to capture a piece of an increasingly competitive market. This is exacerbated in the young adult market because of the short attention span of younger readers and the fact that this marketplace has become so popular since the Harry Potter series

   Keeping the readers attention is a problem common to anyone who has wanted to tell a story and one that, while not foremost in our minds, never goes away.

   So what to do?

   Well, the solution, I guess, is to stay interesting. Sounds easy doesn’t it? But the pitfalls in trying to ensure that the reader sticks with you can often be bigger than the issue that you’re trying to avoid. A good example would be rushing the narrative to a perilous situation without doing the necessary groundwork beforehand to ensure that the reader is both engrossed in the story and invested in the characters.

   One of the things you can do to try to ensure that the narrative stays taut is to be honest with yourself when you redraft and ensure that the people you ask to read your work in progress are the kind who will give you feedback which, though difficult to hear, is both honest and constructive. This will be painful but will benefit you in the long run. Another thing to do is give yourself a decent gap between your drafts. The perspective this brings is invaluable when it comes to tightening your narrative.

   Ultimately it’s down to the writer to be honest with himself or herself as to whether their manuscript is where it should be before they decide to give it to the outside world. If they’re right then hopefully readers will agree with them and vote with their eyes.


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 Author Bio:

   N.P. Griffiths lives in Chaffered Hundred, Essex, where he writes steadily and works for a large company specializing in information technology. He is currently writing the next book in the Isabella’s Heiress series. He can be reached on Twitter via @neilpgriffiths.

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Blurb:

Isabellla's Heiress

Newly dead and struggling to cope with her new reality, Emma Elliott is thrust into a dark and desperate vision of London. In her fight to survive she meets friends, both old and new, and uncovers a world inhabited by two warring clans of angels, one bent on the ultimate destruction of mankind, the other committed to our salvation. A way out presents itself but with the forces arrayed against her Emma starts to wonder why, of all the people who have found themselves in this position; she is being singled out for such special attention. As time passes more questions arise for Emma. Who is Isabella, the woman she is constantly mistaken for? Who are the mysterious Cado Angelus who cast a shadow over Emma's every move? And what part does Emma have to play in the events that will soon unfold in her world and ours.

Buy Links:

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Monday, March 2, 2015

Arriving Late to a Winning Writer's Game [+ a #Free spooky story]

Dark Sky (Cold Ridge/U.S. Marshall Series #4)I can't believe, I had never read a Carla Neggers novel before Dark Sky. Looks like she has several series going with over 70 books, some reaching best seller status. Maybe it's because she's billed as romantic suspense writer. Granted I read the genre if it's cheap because I all too often drop it on the trade pile, unfinished, because there's too much mush and not enough tension. Dark Sky, featuring coffee-guzzling US Marshal Juliet Longstreet and enigmatic Ethan Brooker, delivers a believable romance plus lots of action beyond long bedroom scenes.

The novel is part of a series, but it stands alone. It's starts out when one of Longstreet's arrests gets out of prison and seeks revenge. Longstreet takes care of him, but the plot twists. The first villain is only a tip of the storyline. Another more nefarious set of villains is out to get her and Brooker.

I found the book an interesting, neatly-tied packaged thriller with some extra-nice family dynamics. The Longstreet family is threatened along the read but none of them make easy victims, even the ones not in law enforcement.

Dark Sky. Recommended if you want a fast, light read with lots of action, some smiles, well rounded characters, and government intrigue,

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Just what I need is another excuse to waste more time on the internet but couldn't resist sharing this:

How and why does the internet seduce you and gobble your time? I'll bet it's because there are articles like this one with a list of 300 free things: 300 awesome free things: a massive list of free things you should really know by Ali Mese. Not only are they free, but some look really useful.

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Ta-Da!
The Ghostcrow is published

The Ghostcrow is a prequel to The Ghost in the Closet, set when Dumdie Swartz was a teen and hadn't yet accepted her ability to see ghosts. Only she has a worse problem than ghost guts sticking to her. A demon notices her special talents and wants to possess her because she's more talented than its current host, the mundane jock bullying Dumdie.

At the moment, you can download the novelette [aka 90 minute read] for free on Smashwords using code: RP68A [expires soon].  Of course, I'd appreciate a review--if you would be so kind. Reviews are like a frosted cupcake for a writer.

Of course, you can order it direct from Amazon, if you want to pay. Smashwords allows you to download in mobi so you can get it free on your Kindle.

Oh, the sequel to Noticing Jamilla is going well. I now know where the beginning is.